Being Ugly and Smart or Beauty and Stupid!
On our entire world there are two significant world which are ugly and beauty.The beauty things attractive people attention beside that the ugliest things makes people feel disgusting . These reaction happened we people see some thing in natural like any kind of animals ,plants or even countries , but how about human !.Do people react in the same way, when people meet ugly person or beauty person. which ones is more important ? In my personal view I prefer to be ugly and smart than beauty and stupid.
significantly, smart helps you to be successful in you practical life , For instance, by being smart leads you to start you successful life .In the beginning you will be successful in you studying since you had been starting .Then after graduation from school ,you will have a perfect job with a perfect position . by you intelligent you will improve you self in you job after while you will get a promotion from your boss.To sum up ,smart beneficial helps you to be tremendously successful .
Second, being smart makes you lovable and improve your social life . More and more people will like to having a conversation with you because your personality or your knowledge. For examples, you will be able to discover what each person interesting in to be discus. More over, you will know the things that make each person nervous and you will avoid these things. In addition, If you are smart person ,you will be awareness about the recently events and sophisticated that happened .Which helps you to not be oblivious and be more active. By the time , you had been having the subject that the most people interest to talk about , you will get more friend attracted to you and like to spend their time with you . As result for that your social life will dramatically improve.
Finally ,Your personal life will be stable with out upheavals. What I meaning by that ,your married life will be successful with out conflicts .Fist, between you and your wife or your husband. You will have a capacity to fix the deficit things and make your married life thorough environment . Although, you will behave perfectly with each situation that facing you in our inter life. on other the hand , you will have the ability to discipline your children and convince them about the thing that they should have to do. In short , your married life will be successful at all.
In conclusion, Ugly and smart more important than beauty and stupid.Which makes you glamorous and social ,successful person in yours practical life and yours married life .Now a days most of youth people things about being beauty with out realizing the most important thing which being smart.I advice youth people to not fooled by the out side appearance and looking forward what the person have from knowledge.
Great job BUT you have to improve yourself by working on:
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2- Word form "ADJ, N, V, ADV" <-- you should work hard to improve your self here.
3- Articles "a, an, the"
4- Verb tense
These things will make your essay much clearer.
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Good ideas, copious vocabulary.
Good luck :)
Great intro.
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Smooth writing by using variety of signals.
In general, your essay is pretty good, but you have to be more careful with verb tense and P.O.S.
Good essay. You made an attractive arguments.
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I think you raise some interesting questions in the introduction. It is true that we are naturally attracted to beautiful things - people and otherwise. Yet, everyone in the class chose smart over beautiful. In the long run, smarts are more important while our attraction to beauty is fleeting.
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